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Yes, I do follow Rachelle. I'll have...Hi Pru,<br /><br />Yes, I do follow Rachelle. I'll have to take a look at Nathan's. I haven't checked him out for this stuff. Rachelle's blogs on this a couple months back got me where I am now (with the new draft), but I'm still not sure it's right... *Sigh* - thanks for the Comments!AimeeLSalterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17763596557256341788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-68353054000801313052010-09-30T04:10:57.956-07:002010-09-30T04:10:57.956-07:00Sorry, by that I mean in terms of query/pitch.Sorry, by that I mean in terms of query/pitch.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-57319077733130422482010-09-30T04:09:41.998-07:002010-09-30T04:09:41.998-07:00Aimee, the second one is much better than the firs...Aimee, the second one is much better than the first. Have you checked out Nathan Bransford and Rachelle Gardner on queries etc?<br /><br />I am tied to the UK/Australian market at the moment and they are far less demanding than the US market, I think.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com