tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post2842878733344521868..comments2024-03-10T00:27:43.883-08:00Comments on <center>Aimee L. Salter</center>: Self-Editing #7 – WHEN to show / WHEN to tell.AimeeLSalterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17763596557256341788noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-53661579071364254332012-02-13T13:12:54.508-08:002012-02-13T13:12:54.508-08:00This is terrific. One of the best and clearest art...This is terrific. One of the best and clearest articles on the topic. I have sent a link to a client I am currently working with as she is just beginning to understand how and when to use narrative summary and when to create a live scene. I have been sending her links to blogs that I find helpful and this is one of the top ones so far.Maryannwriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09479027709233807149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-4322411179830025402012-02-06T23:44:18.246-08:002012-02-06T23:44:18.246-08:00This is a great way to work out when to show or te...This is a great way to work out when to show or tell. Thanks for another great post, Aimee. :-)Cally Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313803959936813426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-2725264457887021692012-02-06T06:45:58.413-08:002012-02-06T06:45:58.413-08:00I often get mired in show/tell and really like you...I often get mired in show/tell and really like your point here about change to help break things down. Thanks!Bluestockinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01225973854788421827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-20272592002184050412012-02-06T03:59:40.080-08:002012-02-06T03:59:40.080-08:00I never knew editing was so hard. But I'm lear...I never knew editing was so hard. But I'm learning, thank you so much.<br /><br />I started my next story with my hero waiting impatiently. Now he keeps changing what he's doing, irritating his companion.... More words, but also more fun!<br /><br />So much more to learn ...Jemima Petthttp://jemimapett.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com