tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post920201234258787437..comments2024-03-10T00:27:43.883-08:00Comments on <center>Aimee L. Salter</center>: Pitch Wars Early Bird Mentor Critique 11 - First 500 - YA Contemporary FantasyAimeeLSalterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17763596557256341788noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-22707322941619335792017-05-17T05:46:43.405-07:002017-05-17T05:46:43.405-07:00I agree that it was a great first chapter. The onl...I agree that it was a great first chapter. The only thing I'd add is that I didn't immediately know the MC's gender. Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.com