tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post4151244872949075493..comments2024-03-10T00:27:43.883-08:00Comments on <center>Aimee L. Salter</center>: This Hook Line Won't Sink MeAimeeLSalterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17763596557256341788noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-36809997232983176782010-10-01T08:45:23.012-07:002010-10-01T08:45:23.012-07:00I'd not change supernatural armies to "gu...I'd not change supernatural armies to "guys." The editor will want to know that this is that kind of book. You should also state the genre and title in your hook right at the very beginning: "GOOD MONSTERS is an urban fantasy thriller for the Young Adult market. The novel is about Dani, a 17-year-old woman who has been branded a 'schizophrenic' but discovers her delusions are actually second sight. She is the prophesied Seer, ..."<br /><br />--David Rozansky<br />Publisher, Flying Pen Press<br />http://FlyingPenPress.comDavid Rozanskyhttp://flyingpenpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2622477097361465.post-60526856977737637062010-10-01T05:59:04.880-07:002010-10-01T05:59:04.880-07:00That's a great jacket blurb! Creating those is...That's a great jacket blurb! Creating those is my weakness. Yours sounds like a book I'd actually pick up!Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.com